 |
|
||||
 Blog Entries
|
 The White Mountains I just read a book called “The White Mountains” and its theme is never give up. The book is about a kid called Will and he lives in a world governed by the tripods. The tripods have made the humans their slaves. When your 12 there is this thing called the capping and the tripods can control your mind. He is about to get the capping but there is this place called the White Mountains. If he can escape to the White Mountains he will be free. Does he get to the White Mountains? Read the book to find out Article posted March 28, 2012 at 12:37 PM • comment (5) • Reads 525 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  Great Blog! The only thing is that I would like to know a little more about the White Mountains.
Comment Posted on March 29, 2012 at 10:56 AM by
FR7I love the way you gave a little about the book so we want to read it. I would edit a little more closely though.
Comment Posted on March 29, 2012 at 08:54 AM by
RSYour summary was very good. The only things are that you forgot to put a period at the end and you could've worded some things better. Other than that you did a good job!
Comment Posted on March 28, 2012 at 12:47 PM by
DR6Great Post! The only bad thing I found is you forgot to put period at the end of the last sentence but otherwise great job!
Comment Posted on March 28, 2012 at 12:46 PM by
JO6Great Job! I liked how you explained the book, but didn't give it away. I didn't catch anything you need to improve on! Great Job!
Comment Posted on March 28, 2012 at 12:43 PM by
TW6 |
||||