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Persusive Blog Dear Mom and dad,
I am asking for a cell phone. If I get one I will do these things at the bottom. First I will turn in homework, clean the house and some other stuff. I really think I am going to persuade you! If I do I am going to get what I want.

If I get a phone I will… turn in my homework. Also if I have a phone I will call some people if I need help. If I didn’t have a phone I will keep on bugging you two. I am going to be stupendous at everything I do.

Now if I had a phone and I get lost I can just call you two. If I didn’t have a phone I would have to wait and wait and wait for a really long time. If I had a phone I will do my chores without you asking me.

If I had a phone I would clean the house. Like for example: wash dishes, mop, sweep, and dust! I would also do extra things like give you a massage after your workout. Do things for you when you are really tired and extra things that you can’t know. It is a big surprise!!!

If I had a phone I would fit in. Everybody has one! But only 2 people don’t. I won’t fit in if I didn’t have a phone. So please can I have a phone? Well did this persuade you? I think it did!

Now if this persuaded you, you would get me a phone but if I had a phone… I won’t go over my limit. So I hope this persuaded you! I love you guys! Oh and the extra things are really good! So if only you bought me a phone I would do those things!


Sincerely,
Adrian

Article posted March 7, 2012 at 10:13 AM • comment • Reads 310 • Return to Blog List

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