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THE STORY! March Freewrite

One day long ago there was a very noble shark named Portable Shark. He didn't know what to do with his life so one day he decided to go on an adventure to a far away land. This far away land was called Canada. From what he saw in the movies Portable Shark thought Canada looked amazing, and had lots of fish to eat. This place would be perfect for him.
Portable Shark was soon off to this country ready to take on any danger. All of the sudden while Portable Shark was swimming at full speed a sheep fell into his way. The sheep started wiggling everywhere and making awkward noises.
"Baaaaaaa, baaaaaaaaaaaaa", went the sheep as it fell to the ocean floor. Portable Shark had no time to waste, but he couldn't just leave the sheep to die. He dove down to the bottom, and caught the sheep right before he hit the bottom. As fast as he possibly could Portable Shark swam to the surface. The sheep gasped for air. "Thank you", quietly said the sheep.
Portable Shark couldn't wait any longer to know what happened so he asked. "The sheep confused said, "Don't you know about the sheep smuggling business". Portable Shark had never heard of this before.
"The Canadians smuggle us to places in Africa for a lot of money". Portable Shark did not want to be smuggled to someplace in Africa. He turned around leaving the sheep, and Canada behind him. The only question is where would he go now.

Article posted March 7, 2012 at 09:00 AM • comment (11) • Reads 806 • Return to Blog List

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Haha Chris that was great. your pretty good with shark and sheep storyies. I was a little confused but it was good.
Comment Posted on May 28, 2012 at 05:20 PM by Brett W


This was a good story! But whats with the sheep in the ocean?
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 08:26 AM by Makenna E


This was a good story Chris, great job, write another one telling were he goes.
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 07:18 AM by Dillon M


Nice story Chris! I kinda wish you told us how he was so portable though.
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 07:14 AM by Gianni


This is a good story Chris. Very strange, but good. I liked it a lot.
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 07:00 AM by Emily B


Nice blog! I wonder where you come up with the ideas for your stories.(:
Comment Posted on April 23, 2012 at 12:52 PM by Samantha L


Great, story Chris the shark was the best character.
Comment Posted on April 17, 2012 at 12:36 PM by Curtis


Chris that is a great thing that portable shark did. Also I like portable sharks name.
Comment Posted on April 4, 2012 at 06:31 PM by Zachery V


You certainly do have a way with words Chris! I love your stories :)
Comment Posted on April 3, 2012 at 06:53 PM by Haley S


Chris I like your story. It goes along with Codys a little bit, especially Portable Shark.
Comment Posted on March 27, 2012 at 01:57 PM by Tyler B


Chris why is there a sheep near the ocean in the first place? Is this shark a vegetarian all the sharks I have ever heard of eat any thing they can see.
Comment Posted on March 20, 2012 at 08:23 AM by Blaise C



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