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I am telling you why I should have an iPod touch. I hope you are persuaded to get me one! Also, if you were persuaded or not leave a comment and say yes or say no. remember to say why!
The first thing is there are tons of apps that I will be able to contact you with. Such as Voxer, Skype, text free, i message, e mail, and so many more apps. E mail would be good because then I can pay more attention to my e mail. These are great reasons on why I should have an iPod touch.
Not only that but my friend Kyle has one and he says it works great. He let me use his and I really liked it. So this is also a great reason for me to have an iPod touch
This would be a great consideration for my birthday gift=http://!!! Not only those reasons but my birthday is coming up. Wow=http://=http://! I just keep on coming up with reasons. All these reasons are really great that I have come up with.
I also need to prove I am responsible. But I know it is a very expensive gift and I would not disobey on the rules if I get it. It would also be a responsibility test on seeing if I am responsible. And I know I would be able to do good on it. This would be another great reason on getting me an iPod touch.
So if you would just please buy me this and I would be the happiest kid in the world! Thank you and remember to post the comment!
Article posted March 5, 2012 at 11:33 AM •
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First off, I am VERY impressed with your writing....you seemed to use all of the tools that are used in persuasive writing and advertising. NICE JOB! Secondly, I am sincerely considering this as a gift. I can see you put a lot of thought into your reasons for having an ipod touch. Each of your reasons were actually fairly valid. Most importantly, you are correct...this would be an EXCELLENT opportunity for you to show some responsibility. If I spend such a large amount of money on one item, I think you will understand how valuable that item is. It would be very disappointing for both of us if it got, lost, destroyed or stolen because you did not take care of it. Sooooo...if I choose to purchase one for your Birthday, I hope that you will show both yourself and your Mommy just how responsible you can be. However, what I also hope is that you will get TONS of enjoyment out of it. I love you my sweet, sweet boy! Happy Early Birthday!
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