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My teacher took my iPod.

She said they had a rule;

I couldn't bring it into class

or even to the school.



She said she would return it;

I'd have it back today.

But then she tried my headphones on

and gave a click on Play.



She looked a little startled,

but after just a while

she made sure we were occupied

and cracked a wicked smile.


Her body started swaying.

Her toes began to tap.

She soon was grooving in her seat

and rocking to the rap.


My teacher changed her mind.

She said it's now okay

to bring my iPod into class.

She takes it every day
.


--Kenn Nesbitt




  I like this poem because I like how it rymes. Also I like this poem because at the end the teacher likes the music so she decides to let her have it back but she has to bring it every day to school and still the teacher takes it so that she can listen to the music.

Article posted February 9, 2012 at 08:26 AM • comment (1) • Reads 43 • Return to Blog List
 
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I think that, That poem is a cool I wish I could bring my I pod into school. If you want to comment on my blog just click on my URL.
Posted March 29, 2012 at 11:54 AM by • WP
Posted March 29, 2012 at 11:54 AM by • WP

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