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Holes in My Sidewalk
In LA we read a poem called "Holes in the Sidewalk". This would be my story for Holes in the Sidewalk. I was walking on one sunny morning on a new sidewalk. Soon I fall into a hole and was falling forevr. This happend when I was smartmouthing my parents, because of this I fell in the hole. Soon I climb out and find myself walking again on the sidewalk, but suddenly I fall in holes again and can't get out. This time I argued with my friends and family that is why I can't get out. But later on my friends and family come up to me and help me out of the deep hole, because I apologized to my friends and family. Now I walk my sidewalk with with my friends and family and they make the sidewalk easy to walk.
Article posted February 1, 2012 at 05:54 PM •
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Hey Kat! I like how you used the metaphores! It made it much easier to relate to the poem.
Comment Posted on February 28, 2012 at 08:13 PM by
I like the metaphors you used in in. Good job!
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