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The greatest achievement for any human being is to love god, family, and friends, but most of all love yourself
There was this girl who was so sweet.
Who people thought should be beat.
Not physically but mentally broken down inside.
Now her mind and the insults started to collide.
Day after day it started to get to her she couldn’t speak, cause of the rumors and taunts that made her weak.
She was bound to face self defeat.
As night fell she looked at herself.
Then she put her hands together and preyed upon herself.
She didn’t think god loved her.
She didn’t think that anyone loved her.
She wanted to show the school who was boss.
She he knew were her father’s gun was and that it was at an expensive cost.
If she got in trouble it would be a terrible loss.
The taunts and insults were eating at her.
She could hear the devils voice egging her on.
She tried to fight it but it got louder and louder.
She couldn’t take it anymore.
Remember she had a gun before.
She pulled it out from her father’s drawer and almost pulled the trigger.
Until she seen a bright white figure.
She was afraid.
But her death was delayed.
It was god the almighty man god.
He wanted her to know something.
She was too shocked to say anything.
God held his hand out and hugged her.
All along god loved her.
It was such a sight to see now she could go to school and say “I seen god and what you have to say doesn’t faze gods outlook on me. “ I’m living my own life could you do the same”.
Article posted February 1, 2012 at 11:36 AM •
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This was really nice Karly. It really touched me.
Comment Posted on May 2, 2012 at 09:46 AM by
Karly this poem is well written. The poem has great meaning in it. This poem really spoke to me.
Comment Posted on February 15, 2012 at 11:33 AM by
Wow! Did you write this? It's extremely good.
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