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Holes and Helpers
For this first Language Arts blog of 2012, please choose one of your recent plans ("The Victor", Character Qualities, or the holes in your sidewalk) to write out in a blog for everyone else to read.
Recently in Language Arts, we read and discussed the poem, "There's a Hole in My Sidewalk". It was about a person that keeps falling into a hole in a sidewalk. This "hole" in the sidewalk represents a bad habit. I have one big hole in my sidewalk, waking up to late on school days. This brings me problems. If I wake up late, I don't get enough time to get ready and I need my time to get ready. I could possibly be late, also. If The bell rings before I get to class, I'll get a tardy and a few of those could get me a detention. If I don't have enough time to eat a good breakfast, I get hungry at school and can't pay a ton of attention. In conclusion, I need to wake up earlier or I might run into bad things.
Article posted January 30, 2012 at 08:34 PM •
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Your holes sound a lot like my holes. Nice uses of details. I did see some errors but nothing big.Your conclusion needs to be about your whole paragraph and not just the one topic. Your paragraph was neat and organized. Overall you did a really good job.
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