Pre-Language/Western Civ (Sp/Fr)
Welcome to my class blog. Students are exploring different foreign languages as well as specific historical time periods within Western Civilization.
There are a lot of different places where prejudice can be found today. Say you are at a sporting event. Even if you are a very good person people don’t care. The only thing they care about is the team that you are rooting for. Also in the presidents election there are a few people that people don’t like for idiotic reasons. Take Mitt Romney for example. Even though he is a Mormon people need to listen to what he has to say about government, because that’s what really counts.
I think that It was a good paragraph, but you had some grammar errors. Overall It was a good detailed paragraph.
Comment Posted on January 22, 2012 at 02:17 PM by
JW
Good paragraph. You have some grammar errors.
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 09:25 AM by
CL7
Nice job! There were some grammar errors in your paragraph though. You did a great job!
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 09:22 AM by
JH7
You really spoke the truth FR! Just make sure and read over some of your sentances for some punctuation errors.
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 09:15 AM by
BR
Good paragraph. You have some grammar errors.
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 09:14 AM by
CL7
Good job! I like how you added color to your paragraph and all the details. You had a lot of good examples. I think you should add about the prejudice at school though.
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 09:08 AM by
PM7
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Julia Osteen is a JH teacher at Greater Atlanta Christian School in Norcross, GA. This is her 25th year teaching. She also supports teachers in grades K-12 with technology integration.
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