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 Prejudice Prejudice can be found in lots of places. Prejudice can occur a lot at schools. Kids can be unfair to other kids by saying that they’re not “cool” or “popular”. For some kids this can really hurt them forever. Prejudice can also occur at restaurants or stores. God made us all equal so everyone should be treated the same. I think prejudice should be stopped and people should start treating people the way they want to be treated. Article posted January 11, 2012 at 01:47 PM • comment (5) • Reads 300 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  Awesome Job! The only thing is that I think the first two sentences could be just one sentence
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 09:14 AM by
FR7i really liked how you connected the prejudice with schools, because we can relate to that easily.If you were to extend this post, you should explain why and how it happens at stores. :)
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 08:30 AM by
MSGreat job i like it and I think prejudice should be stopped. Good job
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 08:27 AM by
THAwesome job, prejudice can be found at schools.One thing to work on is maybe a better conclusion sentence. Otherwise, great job!!!
Comment Posted on January 13, 2012 at 08:27 AM by
TW6Wow! Great blog I really enjoyed reading this blog and I don't think there was anything wrong with it.
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