s- class 2015
Nestled in the North-Eastern corner of Pennsylvania, we are Freshmen anxious to share our thoughts with the world! We gladly welcome comments from EVERYONE! To see student work, scroll down to student entries on the right, or select an assignment under teacher assignments and scroll beyond the directions.
The beggining Of The End.
December Free write
The beginning of the End.
It was the beginning of the end; everyone knew it was true. The sky was alight with fire, the moon was pink, and bullets were flying everywhere. Tomas began his journey with one intention, to escape this madness that was enveloping him. So one day he just got up, packed a few things in his bag, and took off into the night. The end began some time later...
The dream or prophecy began like this; He was walking along some kind of path, but he couldn’t see the path, As he was walking he could hear people whispering, it wasn’t just one person either, it sounded like a whole crowd of people just whispering to each other, so he kept walking urged on by this crowd of people he could not see. He eventually got to some sort of village. He walked into the village, but there was no one, all the doors were open, and most of the windows were smashed in. So he began to walk out of the town, and a bright light appeared before him and spoke.
“Tomas!” He exclaimed, “Where do you think you are going?”
Tomas replied to the Light, “Far away from here, that’s where I’m going.”
The Light laughed at him, he said to Tomas,” Where do you think you’re going to go my boy? You’re dreaming! You could walk for a century and not get anywhere.” Tomas thought to himself, I should’ve known I was dreaming, why didn’t I realize this when I was walking on that invisible path? The light interrupted his thoughts and spoke to him once more,” Now Tomas, I need your help, when you wake up boy. I need you to walk to the nearest town, and ask for a man named Lawrence. He will guide you to the elders…
That would've stunk if the light didn't tell him it was a dream. Nice story.
Comment Posted on December 14, 2011 at 06:16 PM by
Benjamin T
I liked the story, you should write stories more often this one was good.
Comment Posted on December 14, 2011 at 09:00 AM by
Christopher W