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what my book is about so far So far my book The Fighting Ground is about a boy named Jonathan finally fulfilling his dream ( becoming a soldier.) Jonathan is being very brave to fight in the war. Jonathan has been shooting with all his might toward those awful Hessians that are fighting as well. That war has past and Jonathan is now wondering off but then he hears a noise and it 1 hessian No Wait! 2 hessians !and there’s another one. Jonathan is now surrounded by three hessians as the oldest one call’s out what I think is Spanish words the other one of them gets out a rope and ties to Jonathan. Jonathan is trapped and he can’t get out what is going to do. But he does nothing.

Jonathan has been walking for what seems like hours now still with those rude Hessians. They suddenly stop and so, so does he. They stopped for a reason the reason was that they heard a familiar noise it was the sound of a cow across the pathway into the forest so they cross and listen out for the noise again and there it was. Walking into the forest suspiciously they saw a cow with a dangling chain from its neck. It is waiting to be milk Jonathan says and the Hessians let him and that’s just a brief of what happened then.
All the soldiers are sleeping and Jonathan is free to do whatever he wants and he realizes that he can go and be free and he also realizes he can do what a real soldier would kill the Hessians. So he takes a gun loads it and aims at the oldest hessian but he can’t do so he unloads the gun and gathers the boy he found sitting in a cupboard for who knows how long, before he heads on his way because he can’t leave him behind who knows what the hessians will do to him. Jonathan has walked with the boy in his arms for more hours until he sees a light and realizes that it’s the Corporal and his army he is joyful but they don’t know who it and one them say it’s the missing soldier and corporal recognizes him and Jonathan is now safe and sound with his army
I hope to read more and that Jonathan will be safe on his journey!

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