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The Best Day of My Life
7 December 2011
The Best Day of My Life: December Free Write
Have you ever been separated from a family member for a long period of time? I have and Sunday October twenty-seventh became the best day of my life. I was so nervous I didn't know to cry or laugh but it was all worth it I had an amazing time.
The Best Day of my life would be the day I got to see my dad for the first time again after eleven years of waiting. A few weeks before we met I was so nervous that I thought I was going to chicken out but I didn't. Everyone was telling me that it was ok to be nervous but I didn't think so, because he was my dad.
Finally the big day came I was so happy! My grandmother and I pulled into Sunoco to wait for my dad. When we looked around the parking lot we saw people waving to us. My grandmother asked is that them? I replied I don’t know I can’t really see so we drove over there and it was them.
I couldn’t stop smiling I was so happy! We hugged and had our laughs. Dad asked my sisters if they wanted to give me the Christmas presents they got for me. Next thing you know there’s a big bag of presents coming at me. I got a beautiful heart necklace from my mom and dad I love it so much I also got a necklace from my little sister Tanisha. I can’t forget my sister Saleena’s presents she gave me the greatest of them all the ones that meant the most to her she gave me a book she made and her favorite rocks, gum and a cute little bear I take everywhere with me.
I love all the presents I got. If it was up to me I could have done without them seeing my family again was the best Christmas present a 16 year old girl would want the most! Getting a hug and seeing them all smile was the best thing ever and that is what made Sunday October twenty- seventh the best day of my life!
Hey Tessa I really enjoy your free write and I hope that you had a great time
Comment Posted on January 20, 2012 at 07:36 AM by
Hey Tessa I really liked your blog and I think it’s really cool you got to see your dad and sisters. I hope you enjoyed it and I had a great time reading this.
Comment Posted on January 11, 2012 at 07:42 AM by