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The Disney Space Coaster

The Disney Space Coaster


            One day my family and I went to Euro Disney and we went straight to the Space Coaster and at the start, it was dark and it looked like we were in space. The lights were colorful. They were red, blue, green, yellow, and pink. It was amazing and where we sat was in a rocket ship. Also the lights were really bright and shiny. There were twists and turns and I said, “This is so cool.” “It’s not cool, it’s amazing,” said my brothers. “Dad, do you like it?” I said, “of course, if you like it, I like it,” said my dad. Then the sun popped up, then Mercury, Earth, Venus, Mars, Neptune, Uranus, Saturn, and Jupiter. The lights looked as yellow as the sun and Mars was as red as fire. I actually thought we were in space. “No, it’s just a pop up,” said my Dad. “Were you scared?” asked my dad. “A little,” I said. “Well, don’t be scared,  it is supposed to be fun.” Said my dad. “You’re right, Dad.” Then big rocks came and they were grey and they were huge. At the end, the stars came and there were zillions of them and they were bright and shiny. It got colder and colder and then there were aliens and they spoke funny and they were green. They had ten eyes and five antennas and I was laughing so hard I cried. The aliens were in a nightclub getting drinks and smoothies. The sign was flashing out red and blue, then the alien put a potion on another and he had seventy-five eyes and then everything was funny and finally it stopped. It was the best roller coaster ever! Then I woke up and it was a dream.


 


Article posted November 28, 2011 at 09:49 AM • comment (5) • Reads 838 • Return to Blog List

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I loved your story
Comment Posted on September 12, 2012 at 01:30 AM by SA


I love your story JM.It's sooooooooo cute like you JM.
Comment Posted on January 11, 2012 at 11:33 AM by MB


Great job JM!! I don't think i wrote this well when i was in third grade. Im glad to see your ideas and powerful sense of imagination. You're a great writer.
Comment Posted on December 3, 2011 at 02:48 AM by Karim Marrouche


I loved your dream JM! I loved the way you described space and the aliens in it. My only hope is to be a part of your next dream cause I love your world and love to know more about it.

Ghassan Marrouche

Comment Posted on December 2, 2011 at 02:16 AM by Ghassan Marrouche


This is a great piece of writing JM! I love it and I am always very proud of you and your smart ideas. Love you.. XXX
Comment Posted on December 2, 2011 at 01:30 AM by Nada Marrouche



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