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 Jack, Jill, and the Evil Witch Then the mean witch that lived there came home and found them and told them if they didn’t leave she would eat them. Jack did not like this so he decided to persuade the witch. Jack’s amazing persuasive abilities helped him and Jill survive and they lived happily ever after eating witch flavored pie for the rest of their days. 3rd person omniscient - There once were a boy and girl named Jack and Jill. Jack being the oldest decided to go on an adventure and Jill thought it would be fun. Jack and Jill went into the woods to go exploring but they found a trail of bread crumbs. Jack was curious and followed the crumbs Jill wasn’t so sure about it even though she was young she was very wise but she went anyway and soon they found a cabin made of candy. Jill was scared to enter the house but Jack being the oldest made Jill go inside first and when they went inside their eyes sparkled from the sweets. Everything was candy and it was amazing. Jack went to sit down and when he looked at the chair it was a peppermint candy cane. Jill though this was a bad idea but Jack didn’t listen. Then the mean witch that lived in the cabin came home and found them and told them if they didn’t leave she would eat them. Jill was very scared but Jack did not care he wanted to stay in the amazing house. So he decided to persuade the witch. Wish his amazing persuasive abilities he helped him and Jill survive and they lived happily ever after eating witch flavored pie for the rest of their days. 3rd person Dramatic - There once was a boy and girl named Jack and Jill who went into the woods to go exploring but they found a trail of bread crumbs. They followed the trail to a house. Jack and Jill went inside. Everything was candy and it was amazing. Jack went to sit down and when he looked at the chair it was a peppermint candy cane. Then the mean witch that lived there came home. The witch wanted them out. Jack persuaded the witch. With Jack’s amazing persuasive abilities he and Jill stayed at the cabin and they lived happily ever after eating witch flavored pie for the rest of their days. Article posted November 21, 2011 at 10:30 AM • comment (2) • Reads 1489 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  Good job combining Jack and Jill and Hansel and Gretil. They are both very good stories.
Comment Posted on November 29, 2011 at 11:27 AM by
Kathleen BThe combination of Jack & Jill and Hansel & Gretil is a very unique concept, and you did a good job writing it.
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