Spalsh in my Pants
“McKayla!” My mom says half yelling half screaming. “You said to let it out.” I reply in a babyish voice. Wait, let me tell you this from the beginning. So here I am at Disneyland walking around with my family. That’s when I see Splash Mountain, the awesome rollercoaster. Mom and I get on it. Of course she has asked me if I need to go to the bathroom, like any 5 year old I say no. Once we are on the ride, and watching all the singing bears and stuff, I realize I need to go the bathroom. I turn around and tell my mom. By that point we are heading up the big drop. She said to hold it in and don’t let it out. All I heard was let it out. So I did the extremely embarrassing stunt of peeing in my pants. When we get off I’m walking all funny and the line is exchanging whispers. My mom and dad took me to the Disney store to buy new shorts. But of course everything was too expensive. The result, wet pants and I had to walk all the way back to the hotel which wasn’t even in the theme park! Anyways, my embarrassment is a little different then Tyler’s in the book. In the book she was embarrassed when the teacher asked her if she was adopted, and when she had to explain her whole family issue. But hey, both are embarrassing.
Comment Posted on February 21, 2012 at 10:28 PM by
Alyssa
Great blog! I think your story is really funny as long as it wasnt me! I think that you tied the story to your own story! good job!
Comment Posted on December 4, 2011 at 11:18 PM by
Jeremy
Good blog. I think that you are right in a way. But would you like to be the one that was being tested on. I would rather have a couple of mice die rather than people dying from the product they are trying to sell. Also people might be using a little bite to many animals for the testing and we need to find a way where we are not using either one and not having humans or animals suffer through the testing.
Comment Posted on December 1, 2011 at 09:48 PM by
Ben
Wow!!! So embarssing that happend to me once when I was in preschool and you can read about it in my blog if you would like if you do it is on one of the older blogs from last year. Good job though you really grabbed my attention and I enjoyed the thing execpt the part where you wet your pants. You are a great writter and friend. I think that when you through in the thing about Tyler I just would of added that she has embarrassed when she didn't have a family tree other wise what a great blog!!!
Comment Posted on November 30, 2011 at 05:31 PM by
Addie
Oh My Gosh! That would have been really embarrasing! Wow! I wonder what the other people thought. Wow! I already said that didn't I? Of course you were only 5 so yeah. I've never had that happen to me, but there was an embarrasing time when I was 4 and I was in preschool and a girl opened the bathroom door. That was pretty embarrasing too... Your blog was really good and meaty. Bye!
Comment Posted on November 28, 2011 at 08:24 PM by
Alexandra
Ha ha! That sounded very ebarrasing and I don't think that I would ever do that even if my parents told me to. I have been to Disneyland before but I have never heard of Splash Mountain. One time we were having spaghetti squash and it blew up in the microwave. It hit me in the face and I laughed my head off til we finished dinner. Well, that was a good blog with good voice.
Comment Posted on November 28, 2011 at 07:59 PM by
Ethan
Hey Kayles, it's Sage. The first thing I ave to say is, I like how you included things like, "How any five year old would say,no". Also,I feel bad for you, I know what peeing in my pants and having to walk around and humiliate myself feels like. It's not fun. Well, I like how you put a lot of detail and fun comments. See ya tomorrow. Bye bye:)
Comment Posted on November 28, 2011 at 06:42 PM by
Sage
Good blog Mckayla I feel bad for you. Then your mom can tell you I told you to missy.Everone looked at you funny poor you. Now I feel bad for the people that come in to ride next. Embarrasssing! Well anyways I bet the big drop was fun. At least you got new shorts.
Comment Posted on November 28, 2011 at 06:27 PM by
Megan
Hey Mckayla, nice story. Did you like Disney Land? I personaly like Disney Land. Which ride did you like the most?
Comment Posted on November 21, 2011 at 04:54 PM by
jocsan
I really like your story. I only went to Disneyland once and I was 6. Did you like Disneyland?
Comment Posted on November 21, 2011 at 04:52 PM by
Ariana
Wow. That must have been really embarrassing. Anyways I liked your story. And I love Splash Mountain Its scary and fun. What's your favorite ride at Disneyland?
Comment Posted on November 21, 2011 at 04:51 PM by
Quetzalli