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Three Third Person Stories! POV- 3rd Person- Omniscient

Tom And Sally were going for a walk down the road when they found a small puppy. Tom thought they should just leave it there so he said, “Someone else will find it and pick it up so let's just leave it there." But Sally thought that the right thing to do was to bring it home so she said, “No lets take it home and care for it." Both of them wanted their way so they decided to compromise. They took the puppy to an animal shelter. This way they both ended up happy because the puppy was taken care of but they didn’t have to take it home and have a new responsibility.

POV-3rd Person- Limited Omniscient

Tom and Sally were going for a walk down the road when they found a small puppy. Tom thought they should just leave it there so he said, “Someone else will find it and pick it up so let's just leave it here." Then Sally said, “No lets take it home and care for it." Tom started thinking of a compromise and decided they could take the puppy to an animal shelter. That way they didn’t have to take the puppy home or leave it on the side of the road.

POV-3rd Person- Dramatic

Tom And Sally were going for a walk down the road when they found a small puppy. Tom said, “Someone else will find it and pick it up so let's just leave it here." Sally said, “No lets take it home and care for it." Compromising on the situation they decided to take the puppy to an animal shelter. The puppy ended up being taken care of without Sally and Tom having the responsibility of a new puppy.

Article posted November 15, 2011 at 10:25 AM • comment (2) • Reads 1532 • Return to Blog List

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That was a good story, and I'm glad the puppy is ok:)
Comment Posted on December 7, 2011 at 11:58 AM by Bobbie K


Kayla, that was a good story I understand the third points of views better now.
Comment Posted on November 30, 2011 at 07:20 PM by Alexis D



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