Julia D

Third Time’s a Charm

Bynix and Barron

3^rd Person Omniscient

Bynix and Barron were in the house.  Barron was thinking what is in that box that the lady brought home?

Bynix was thinking what is that fluffy thing trying to sniff my box?

Barron was wondering why the lady put the box in the kid’s room.

3^rd Person Limited

Bynix and Barron were in the house.

Barron was walking around.

Bynix was thinking if the fluffy thing was a dog or what?

Barron watched the lady as she put the box in the kid’s room.

3^rd Person Dramatic

Bynix and Barron were in the house.

Barron was walking around and he said “I’m going to try to figure out what’s going on!” 

Bynix was saying,” Why is this fluffy dog trying to sniff my box?”

Barron said, “I got it…that lady has a cat. Let’s see where she puts it!’’

Bynix then said “where am I going? What room is this?”