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Water story
One day was flowing in od directions the sudenly I start falling and I realize that I'm condensating.So start to I'm snowing I'm haling I'm raining and frosting.then The next day I see a bright light and now I'm melting now I'm flowing downhill now splash I hit a river and a ocean,and a lake and on to trees and most finally that next morning .I I see a bright light Evan brighter than before I'm I'm getting SMALLER smaller now I'm water vapor and I'm come up I'm evaporating from lakes and trees ,levees,oceans,ground water,and surface water .Now I'm peacefully traveling to the clouds from the energy of the sun and now Im In the the clouds to start all over.
Article posted November 9, 2011 at 10:34 AM •
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What a life. If you got rained on the ocean, you might've even gotten swallowed by a fish and then things would have been rather gross.
Comment Posted on January 30, 2012 at 02:13 PM by
un lun dun


Neat. I thought your story was really good. Maybe some grammer errors, but cool. I really liked how you told it from the water's point of view.
Comment Posted on December 5, 2011 at 03:23 PM by
GarrettD


That was an awesome blog! Your blog is my favorite out of your class.
Comment Posted on December 2, 2011 at 09:20 AM by
Hayley

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