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The Drive to Our Hotel
The Drive to Our Hotel
It was a cool summer day in Dubai. My whole family jumped in the car and was ready for a wonderful day. We saw birds and wonderful stuff. Later, we laughed and I told my dad everything that I saw. He smiled. I saw butterflies. Also, I saw people smiling at me. That means they are extremely friendly people. They actually were really friendly and clean.
Later, I opened my magazine and read, then I read my book. After that, me and my brother talked. Then, I just looked at the inside of the car. I couldn’t stop smiling!
Later, we played. After that, I talked with my family and said, “What a wonderful day it would be to go to the beach.” My mom told me we were almost at the hotel and I was excited! I was more excited than my family. I looked out the window and saw the clouds shaped like a horse and a butterfly. At last, my mom told me we were there and I said, “Yay!”
Article posted November 9, 2011 at 05:47 AM •
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You're a great writer as a beginner. Keep it up! I love the story.
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:26 AM by
Feryal Berjawi - ACS Grade 9


dear fatma
its great and lovely story iliked it alot
keep the good job and you will be agreat writer
love u
Comment Posted on November 16, 2011 at 12:28 AM by
sabeekah al najim

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