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When I Went to Paris
When I Went to Paris
It was a freezing cold day in Paris. I had to wear a sweater! We were going to the Eiffel Tower and I was very excited! It smelled like it was going to rain. The Eiffel Tower was so big! I knew that I was going to have a good afternoon. I did! There were a lot of people. I saw sweating joggers, and enthusiastic children. Then, I went on a carousel. It was so fast that it almost blew me off! After that, my mom took a picture. I had a fantastic day!
Then I felt little drops of rain on my skin and it started to rain! I told my mom, “It’s raining!” She told my dad, “It’s raining!” then my dad told my brother, “It’s raining!” We tried to get a taxi, but everyone else was too! Finally, we got a taxi. It was a black one. My brother took pictures when we were riding to the hotel. Then I took the camera from him and saw them. They were beautiful! Since it was night and raining the colors blended! Then we finally got to the hotel and showered and slept.
As I was laying in my bed, I thought about my wonderful day that I had. Then my mom came and said, “Time to go to sleep!” A few minutes later she came closer and gave me a hug. Then she turned off the lights. I thought more about my day. After that I started to dream. Suddenly, it was daylight in the room. I knew it was a new day!
Article posted November 9, 2011 at 02:58 AM •
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your a great illustrator, you should be an artist
Comment Posted on January 24, 2012 at 06:51 AM by
You're poster is beautiful!
Comment Posted on January 23, 2012 at 09:07 AM by
After reading that story, I would love to visit Paris one day. You described one story so well. Very good writing!
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:59 AM by
Maria ACS 9
Your drawing is amazing! It must have taken you a long time to draw it because you have very nice details. And your story is very interesting, having lived in Paris for 6 years you made me remember all the nice and exciting sights. Good job :)
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:45 AM by
Nazek ACS 10
It seems that you've really poured your heart into this piece, it's been a long time since I've read something so sincere. Loved the part where you wrote "since it was night and raining the colors blended!"
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:29 AM by
Habib Kassassir Grade 9
Hey good job! keep up the amazing work, by the sound of it it seemed amazing.
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:24 AM by
Jad Elhajj ACS - 9
I love your story; it made me want to go to Paris. Paris is my favorite place on Earth. It's just too amazing, isn't it? I love your use of descriptive words to describe the scene. The reader can easily imagine it :)
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:17 AM by
I think that you're illustrations are really nice.They make me want to go to paris!
Comment Posted on November 21, 2011 at 04:26 AM by
I thought your illustrations were wonderful. They made me want to fly to Paris and visit the sights!
Comment Posted on November 16, 2011 at 02:13 AM by
I love your story and the illustrations!
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