3rd time’s the charm.

3rd Person Omniscient

      Duncan was laying there on his bed patiently thinking “Why does school have to be forced upon his life.”

Meanwhile his mom down stairs yelled his name three times for breakfast. The longer she waited the more she thought “Why can’t I have a son that just would listen.”

Then his mother in the height of her anger marched up stairs slammed the door open and began yelling. Duncan was just laying there thinking “I don’t care.”

3rd Person Limited Omniscient

           Duncan was lying on his bed patiently thinking “Why does school have to be forced upon me.”

He could hear his mom screaming down stairs for him to come for breakfast but he “did not care.” He heard her stampeding up the steps but he just thought why “Can’t she leave me alone.”

The door slammed open and his mom stood there red in the face with anger lines on her face. Then she started yelling but Duncan just thought “I don’t care”.

3rd Person Dramatic

           Duncan was lying on his bed eyes closed and hands behind his head. Then suddenly his mother looking slightly irritated was yelling for him to come eat. With each passing time he face grew redder and he voice got louder. Duncan up in his room in the same position but looking slightly annoyed. Then the mom redder than ever before took heavy footsteps all the way up the stairs. Then she reached the door and with all her might she slammed the door open. Duncan still just lying there just with a content and relaxed look on his face did nothing.