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 Dance Class.... 3rd Person Omniscient Every Thursday these girls named Valorie and Ariel have dance class and the one day they were learing about these kick things. Valorie thought they were going to be so easy. When she was going though, her cousin Ariel kicked her in the eye. Valorie was laughing and kinda crying because it was funny, but hurt at the same time and Ariel was so upset that she hit her. At first Ariel complained about her foot hurting, so Valorie was some what mad at her because Ariel didn't even ask her if she was ok. Valorie didn't storm off though, they just decided to hug and it was a.o.k.(except her eye hurt for the next week)! 3rd Person Limited Omniscient Every Thursday these girls named Valorie and Ariel have dance class and the one day they were learing about these kick things. Valorie thought they were going to be so easy. When she was going though, her cousin Ariel kicked her in the eye. Valorie was laughing and kinda crying because it was funny, but hurt at the same time. At first Ariel said something about her foot so Valorie was some what mad at her because Ariel didn't even ask her if she was ok. Valorie didn't storm off though, they just decided to hug and it was a.o.k.(except her eye hurt for the next week)! 3rd Person Dramatic Every Thursday these girls named Valorie and Ariel have dance class and the one day they were learing about these kick things. When she was going, her cousin Ariel kicked her in the eye. Valorie was laughing and kinda crying. At first Ariel complained about her foot hurting, and Ariel didn't even ask her if she was ok. Valorie didn't storm off though, they just decided to hug and it was a.o.k.(except her eye hurt for the next week)! Article posted November 7, 2011 at 09:24 AM • comment (4) • Reads 1496 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  This is very well written Lauren. Its awesome how you wrote it about dacne.
Comment Posted on December 13, 2011 at 05:22 PM by
Bethany RLauren, I liked your story. Good job!
Comment Posted on November 29, 2011 at 09:05 AM by
Makenna EI take full credit for the character names c[:. Also good job, you got yours submitted already, which is more than I can say for mine.
Comment Posted on November 21, 2011 at 04:00 PM by
Keeley CThis is quite an interesting story, Lauren. Nicely done.
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