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 charms There once was this little girl who was walking down the street. She saw a little boy and was thinking to herself “Isn’t he really hot?” As the little girl was walking by him she decided to stop him an ask him to go play in the sandpit. They were walking to the sandpit and at the same time the little boy is thinking to himself " She is one cute little girl". As they are playing in the sandpit they start to talk about their families. 2rd person Limited Omniscient. There once was this little girl who was walking down the street. She saw a little boy and was thinking to herself, “Isn’t he really hot?” As the little girl was walking by him she decided to stop him an ask him to go play in the sandpit. They were walking to the sandpit, as they are playing in the sandpit they start to talk about their families. 3rd person Dramatic There once was this little girl who was walking down the street. She saw a little boy but as the little girl was walking by him an ask him to go play in the sandpit. They were walking to the sandpit. While they are playing in the sandpit they start to talk about their families. Article posted November 7, 2011 at 08:43 AM • comment (2) • Reads 1494 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  This is really good Emily. I like your style!
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Dalton SI like the story's Emily. Good job.
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