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Remembering Veterans Sometimes when veterans come home they have nothing and need help because of what they have done to serve us. They have put their life at risk to protect us and keep our freedom. We sometimes give them help but when they really need it, they get nothing. When some get home they get help and they can live. Then they get less and less and less help until they are on the street and without money.
That is my 2nd paragraph in my Always Remember essay. Are there any lines that aren't clear? Is there anything that is too long or short?

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At home I have 4 cats but they all have weird names and we usually come up with ryhms for their names and how they act individually. Some other information is I am currently a brown belt but my brother and I are going to test soon for our brown senior and we are going to try and make it to black belt.
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