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Remembering Veterans Sometimes when veterans come home they have nothing and need help because of what they have done to serve us. They have put their life at risk to protect us and keep our freedom. We sometimes give them help but when they really need it, they get nothing. When some get home they get help and they can live. Then they get less and less and less help until they are on the street and without money.
That is my 2nd paragraph in my Always Remember essay. Are there any lines that aren't clear? Is there anything that is too long or short?

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Gian-Luc Jordan, we all miss you so much. Always in the hall, I always heard “hey look, its Gian-Luc.” Everyone in the hall turns and looks & what do you see? Gian-Luc with a big smile on his face. His smile always shined like the sun. I always saw him with his friends laughing, smiling, laughing, anything you could think of. His family dearly loved him. He had a big sister and little siblings. I thought Luca was pretty cool and super nice. He was one of my friends, even though I didn’t get to talk to him much. He had SO much energy around his friends. I always think of him and pray for his family. You were loved so much. I miss you so much Luca.

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