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Sometimes when veterans come home they have nothing and need help because of what they have done to serve us. They have put their life at risk to protect us and keep our freedom. We sometimes give them help but when they really need it, they get nothing. When some get home they get help and they can live. Then they get less and less and less help until they are on the street and without money.
That is my 2nd paragraph in my Always Remember essay. Are there any lines that aren't clear? Is there anything that is too long or short?
Article posted November 6, 2011 at 11:27 PM • comment • Reads 65 • Return to Blog List
 
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