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I Dont have much candy left. And there is no rule for not bringing candy in our class. But if i were to make my own candy, It would be named Chocolate-Nana's, The inside will be all soft and mooshy. and the outside will be crunchy cause it has peanuts and hard chocolate. But the inside will taste like bananas. and the whole thing will be shaped like a dancing banana! And the wrapper would be yellow, the front would say Cocolate-Nanas, and on the back of it would have a toy, a little one like a toy Chocolate-Nana. Yeah that would be really cool!
Article posted November 4, 2011 at 12:07 PM •
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I love how you have described your candy so thoroughly. I can almost taste it! The one thing you may want to work on is limiting your use of the word "and". Try starting some of your sentences with different words to add more variety.
Comment Posted on November 27, 2011 at 09:47 PM by
That soundes good
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