My strongest paragraph was the first because I spent a lot of time on it. Don't be too harsh!!!
Some remember the little things like that Saturday you got to spend with your big sis or that day you got to spend with your dad. Others remember the happy big things like college your first car or your first christmas. Most remember the tragic big events like 9/11, a death, World War 1, World War 2, Pearl Harbor. one thing we forget is to always remember.
So......? watcha think???