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We are a group of 7th graders from Colorado who want to practice our writing and communication skills. We are excited to expand the walls of our classroom and collaborate with other classes! Please leave us comments and your blog URL, so we can respond back to you!
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This year we remembered 9-11’s tenth anniversary. Why did we do that? Every year we celebrate President’s Day and the 4th of July and Memorial Day and Veteran’s Day and other national holidays like these, but, why? Why is it important to remember?

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