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Always Remember Here's my introductry:
Have you ever forgotten what should always be remembered? Most Americans will never forget 9/11, the troops, and the day we got our independence.We will never forget these days for many good and bad reasons.
Please help me improve this paragraph.

Article posted October 27, 2011 at 10:02 PM • comment (1) • Reads 1710 • Return to Blog List

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I can't really find anything wrong with it, it's a really good opening. Maybe if the paragraph were a bit longer?
Comment Posted on November 1, 2011 at 07:52 PM by Jenna
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