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Here's my introductry:
Have you ever forgotten what should always be remembered? Most Americans will never forget 9/11, the troops, and the day we got our independence.We will never forget these days for many good and bad reasons.
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Article posted October 27, 2011 at 10:02 PM •
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I can't really find anything wrong with it, it's a really good opening. Maybe if the paragraph were a bit longer?
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