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" Why is it important to always remember? A good reason to always remember is because it teaches you something important about the past or when you make a mistake. For example, when you touch a very hot stove, you remember to be more observant and careful all the time. Another example would be a patriotic holiday like Veterans Day. It celebrates our soldiers fighting for our country and putting their lives at risk for ours. This holiday teaches us to appreciate what these great men and women have done for our country."