We are a group of 7th graders from Colorado who want to practice our writing and communication skills. We are excited to expand the walls of our classroom and collaborate with other classes! Please leave us comments and your blog URL, so we can respond back to you!
Hey guys! Please give me feedback on this paragraph from my essay. It is the introduction.
Every time I see a soldier in uniform, I remember that I live in America, a land of freedom. What soldiers do for the country and its citizens is braver and more compassionate than anything I could ever dream of doing. They go to war knowing that they might not come home. That is why we honor our veterans every year. The soldiers come home heroes. People that we respect, thank, and remember.