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Pirates

Pirates


There are pirates on a boat,


Sailing, on the river


Time had passed away,


No one from the pirates had found the treasure map,


But the real treasure,




Is a real friend ship.


 


 




 


 

Article posted October 27, 2011 at 08:49 AM • comment (8) • Reads 1538 • Return to Blog List

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Hey Yasmine. I really like your poem especially the part where the pirates became friends.
Comment Posted on December 14, 2011 at 11:37 AM by Kinda


I really like your poem! I loved the part at the end about friendship.
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:18 AM by Maria


This poem is really nice! Keep on writing some more!!
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:09 AM by Gheeda


Very creative! good job :)
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:07 AM by Marwa


I liked when you said in the end "is a real
friendship."

Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:22 AM by Aya


I liked your poem a lot!!I also liked your last part of the poem a lot!!
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:17 AM by KA


Wow! Yasmine, you are great at making poems!
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:09 AM by FN


I really like your poem.
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:08 AM by GA


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