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Pirates
Pirates
There are pirates on a boat,
Sailing, on the river
Time had passed away,
No one from the pirates had found the treasure map,
But the real treasure,
Is a real friend ship. 
Article posted October 27, 2011 at 08:49 AM •
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Hey Yasmine. I really like your poem especially the part where the pirates became friends.
Comment Posted on December 14, 2011 at 11:37 AM by
Kinda


I really like your poem! I loved the part at the end about friendship.
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:18 AM by
Maria


This poem is really nice! Keep on writing some more!!
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:09 AM by
Gheeda


Very creative! good job :)
Comment Posted on November 24, 2011 at 06:07 AM by
Marwa


I liked when you said in the end "is a real
friendship."
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:22 AM by
Aya


I liked your poem a lot!!I also liked your last part of the poem a lot!!
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:17 AM by
KA


Wow! Yasmine, you are great at making poems!
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:09 AM by
FN


I really like your poem.
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 02:08 AM by
GA

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