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We are a group of 7th graders from Colorado who want to practice our writing and communication skills. We are excited to expand the walls of our classroom and collaborate with other classes! Please leave us comments and your blog URL, so we can respond back to you!

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teacher: Mrs. Lubich

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Why should we remember?
This is my introductory sentence:
Why should we remember? We can’t forget so that we don’t make the same mistake again. We want to remember the people in the military. We want to appreciate them and thank them for what they did for our country and other people’s countries. Three reasons that occurred to me that I will never forget are when I broke my nose, when my little sister’s diaper leaked onto my flute case, and when I fell in the halls.

How is it? any thing I can improve on? Please respond to my paragraph.
Article posted October 27, 2011 at 08:27 AM • comment • Reads 44 • Return to Blog List
 
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