This is my introductory sentence:
Why should we remember? We can’t forget so that we don’t make the same mistake again. We want to remember the people in the military. We want to appreciate them and thank them for what they did for our country and other people’s countries. Three reasons that occurred to me that I will never forget are when I broke my nose, when my little sister’s diaper leaked onto my flute case, and when I fell in the halls.
How is it? any thing I can improve on? Please respond to my paragraph.