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Finally, we should always remember our troops. They risk so much for us. They sacrifice a lot. Our troops fight in wars for our freedom. They risk and sacrifice so much. Without them we might not have freedom. Imagine your life without freedom. It wouldn’t be as pleasant. We should also think about people that just do good things. For example people who help the homeless and hungry people. Always remembering your mistakes is important, but remembering our troops is better. It is better because remembering mistakes may teach us lessons, but our troops give us freedom.

This is my strongest paragraph. Is there anything I should add to it? Is this paragraph understanable?
Article posted October 26, 2011 at 10:13 PM • comment • Reads 51 • Return to Blog List
 
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