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This paragraph I would liek some help with. What else should I write about? Here is the paragraph:
Once you remember your troops the whole world changes. Troops battle for our freedom and we should fight for them. When I say that, I mean don’t let anyone forget them. Remembering makes you proud to be an American. So, be a proud American and reminisce.
Article posted October 26, 2011 at 09:14 PM •
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I feel when you say "Remembering makes you proud to be an American," you are saying that people aren't "Americans" if you don't remember.
Comment Posted on October 30, 2011 at 08:50 PM by
TaylorL

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