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Us, as humans remember things. We do many different things to represent what we are remembering such as having assemblies, making artwork, or even having no school or work. We remember things as little as getting in trouble with our parents or things as important as 9/11. This is an essay that explains why we remember.
I am looking for feedback on my first sentence. I want something more creative than just, "Us, as humans remember things."
Article posted October 26, 2011 at 08:52 PM •
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I love to play sports. My favorite sport is soccer, but I also play basketball and volleyball. My least favorite thing to do is chores. My favorite subject in school is math, and my least favorite is social studies. Those are facts about me.