My Weakest Paragraph
To “always remember” is very important. If you couldn’t remember it would be very different. When you remember you can learn life lessons or learn about something fun to do. Like the saying” you live and learn”. Everyone has experiences that change their life forever.
I think this is my weakest paragraph, what do you think I could fix?
Article posted October 25, 2011 at 09:09 PM •
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I think maybe you could add a couple of examples or something, maybe filler sentences.
Comment Posted on October 30, 2011 at 08:48 PM by
I think this paragraph was good I liked how you put a quote in there.
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