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I Survived the Dragon Fury!

I Survived the Dragon Fury!


It was finally my turn on the ride, Dragon Fury. I felt a shiver of excitement as I climbed into the cart. We zoomed along and the wind was howling against my face as we spun around the track. We sped downhill and turned constantly, nearly touching the ground.

The next turn was a very sharp one. I slid across the seat and ended up pushed against the side of the cart. My fingers were shivering as I gripped onto the black, leather rail. I was just hanging on, my bottom wasn’t even on the seat anymore! My heart was pounding against my chest. I was really scared. As my grip was loosening, it was just my luck that we turned that corner and I flew back into my seat.

We twisted and turned as we continued on the ride. Then we stopped. I’d survived the Dragon Fury. I wanted to go on it again!

Article posted October 25, 2011 at 04:53 AM • comment (8) • Reads 1352 • Return to Blog List

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Amoura. The ride seems so great. You made it seem so real!I felt that I was sitting next to you and my heart almost stopped. Keep up the beautiful writing!
Comment Posted on December 5, 2011 at 12:39 PM by RIMA SAGHIEH
Loved the story Amoora!!!! Wish i was on the ride with you!!!!!!!!! So exciting!!! Great writing :) Lana
Comment Posted on December 5, 2011 at 12:08 PM by Lana
Reading the story made me wish I was there with you. Julia
Comment Posted on November 27, 2011 at 09:34 AM by Julia
loved your description. it made me feel as though i was sitting next to you. such good vocabulary i cannot write like this piece. thank you for letting me share your exciting experience. Way to go great.
Comment Posted on November 25, 2011 at 05:04 AM by nahed naamani
best book ever
Comment Posted on November 23, 2011 at 11:41 AM by AZ
Honestly, my heart was beating as fast as a drum when we went through this in class. Great piece of writing!
Comment Posted on November 22, 2011 at 11:19 AM by Mrs. Khoury
Felt the thrill more than the actual ride!!
So proud of you habibi. FH
Comment Posted on November 19, 2011 at 09:22 AM by Farah
Great read. Enjoyed it a lot.
Comment Posted on November 19, 2011 at 12:44 AM by hz

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