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by MEM teacher: Mrs. B (Grade 4 2012-2013)

The Family Swimming Race

The Family Swimming Race

One day, when my dad and I were swimming under the hot sun, we decided to have a swimming race. It’s a good thing all the family were there playing with each other.

We didn’t want to disturb anybody, so dad and I made posters. We put the finished posters in different places where they were playing. We put a sign-up sheet next to the pool. They read the posters, signed the paper, and all participated except my grandmother who is too old so she was the ref.

I had a smile of excitement on my face as we began the race. I was watching all the older people in front of me and was scared that they would win the prize. When my grandma started counting down for us to start I ignored them and focused on the water. But I got even more nervous! We were all squashed together in the pool so, because I’m small, I was able to swim between the gaps. I got near to the front, but my brother was ahead of me by about 2 feet. Suddenly, I saw my little cousin drowning. I grabbed him, put him on the side, and continued the race.

My brother won and I came second. I was very happy for my brother.





Article posted October 25, 2011 at 04:40 AM • comment (2) • Reads 1086 • Return to Blog List

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I really like your story man!

Comment Posted on December 10, 2011 at 06:43 AM by KB


I loved reading about your special family day. It sounds like you had a lot of fun!
Comment Posted on November 22, 2011 at 11:27 AM by Mrs. K



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