My first paragraph is as follows:

Why is it important to remember? Memory is everything. If humans had no memory every day you would have to learn your ABCs. Learned them one day the next day you wouldn’t remember so you would have to learn them again. Without memory the world would completely change.You should allways remember beacuse, what you remember determines who you are and what you will be!
If you are reading this please remember to remember the veterans who have died for us and our country. Also if your reading this provide feedback and tell me how I can improve.