We are a group of 7th graders from Colorado who want to practice our writing and communication skills. We are excited to expand the walls of our classroom and collaborate with other classes! Please leave us comments and your blog URL, so we can respond back to you!
It is always important to remember our veterans who served our country because of the following reasons. The main reason is so that the lives that were lost were not lost in vain. Also it is important to honor the families of the men and women who died serving our country and protecting our freedom. Also we should never take our freedom for granted.
This is my first paragraph in my essay .What do you think? Plese give me feed back.