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Out of the paragraphs I wrote, I think this one is the best.
"The time you broke a bone, did you try to break it again? Of course not! You predict what’s going to happen if you do something. The memory of the pain of breaking your bone was probably enough for you to be more cautious and realize what stunts would hurt you, or at least be somewhat safe. The good and the bad memories help you to know what you should do again, and what you really shouldn’t try when you still have a boot on. Not to mention any names… Raphael!"
I hope you liked it! Please give me feedback!
Article posted October 24, 2011 at 05:44 PM •
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That is a great paragraph. Pain helps you remember. Like when I got stitches. (remember that?)
Comment Posted on November 3, 2011 at 04:27 PM by
When I broke my wrist it didn't really hurt. But, good paragraph. I like how you referred to something that people remember like pain.
Comment Posted on November 1, 2011 at 09:49 PM by
I really enjoyed reading this paragraph. It was pretty funny how you poked fun at Raphael. Your paragraph was well written and I want to read the rest of your essay.
Comment Posted on October 30, 2011 at 05:15 PM by
Great connection to your ife! I loved how you paragraph flowed.
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