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I need some feedback on this paragraph, it's my worst one.Thanks!

Another reason to remember soilders is ciizenship. This involves citzenship because for us to be able to remain a citzen of the united states of america, some of us need to give our services to the U.S. military. without that sacrafice those people made, we would not live as good as a life as we do now, we would live unprotected .

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