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This is the first paragraph of my Always Remember paragraph. I think that it is pretty good but if you have anything to say please comment on this.
I will always remember how I dad an on handed wheelie one my bike and almost broke my leg. I'll always remember that because the swelling on my leg was very traumatic. That is similar to when Pearl Harbor was bombed because it started a very traumatic war. Traumatic thing make you want to remember so it doesn’t happen again. So let’s hope that history has been traumatic enough to not repeat itself. This is the first paragraph of my Always Remember paragraph. I think that it is pretty good but if you have anything to say please comment on this.
Article posted October 24, 2011 at 04:29 PM •
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I would adjust your first sentence. A few spelling corrections would make it better. I enjoyed how you intertwined your life and Pearl Harbor.
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My name is Kyle. My favorite classes are art and science. Sometimes I forget to do my work or I accidentally leave it somewhere but, I try not to let that get in the way of my work. Outside of school I generally like to sit back and just relax. My all time favorite way to kill time is playing video games.