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 Aliens Gone Crazy Charlie was playing kickball with his friends, Bob and Joe. They were having a lot of fun until they heard a strange noise and saw something flashing at the corner of their eyes. They looked up and saw a spaceship landing a couple of yards away. They ran toward the spaceship and hid behind a tree to spy on it. Once it landed, the door to the spaceship opened and over 1,000 aliens came out of it. This amazed Charlie and his friends so they came out of their hiding spots and walked closer and closer to the spaceship. When they got to the spaceship, the aliens started speaking a very, very weird language. “Bleep blop, bleep blop, bleep blop”, said the aliens and then the alien up front stuck out his hand to Charlie and then the two of them shook hands. “Hello. My name is Charlie. What is your name?” The aliens were astonished by Charlie’s language. Then, the aliens started speaking their language again. After that, the aliens started speaking English and said, “We have come in peace. How are you today?” Charlie and his friends were flabbergasted. The aliens can speak English, thought Charlie. “We are good. Hey, I have a great idea! Do you all want to play kickball with us?” asked Charlie. “Yes! I think that would be fun!” said the aliens with an evil laugh. Chapter 2- Kickball Buddies Charlie, Bob, Joe and the aliens were playing kickball in Charlie’s yard and it turns out that the aliens were pretty good at kickball. They were kicking homeruns almost every time they kicked. Whenever Charlie and his friends were up, the aliens would always jump up and catch the ball, or stretch their arms and catch it. Charlie and the aliens became friends and played kickball every day after lunch. Charlie and the aliens became so much like friends that Charlie let the aliens sleep at their house. The aliens would eat breakfast really early so his mom didn’t see almost 2,000 aliens eating cereal in her kitchen. That would be weird. It turned out that the aliens favorite game and sport was kickball. Charlie and the aliens would play kickball all the time in the park. Charlie and the aliens were very nice to each other. But what Charlie didn’t know is that sooner or later the aliens would take over the Earth. Chapter 3- Aliens Go Wild One morning, Charlie was still but the aliens were awake eating breakfast and talking about their evil plan to take over the Earth. Cyber (the leader of the aliens) suggested, “Why don’t we leave a note for Charlie saying, ‘Dear Charlie, we missed our home up in the sky and we decided to leave. Thank you for being such a good friend to us. We are really glad we landed in your yard! Thanks, the aliens.’ But instead we will fly our spaceship to the mountains and think of a plan there.” All of the aliens decided on using Cyber’s plan and started working on it. They wrote the note and started to fire up their spaceship. When they were done with the first part of their plan, they headed of to the mountains. Charlie woke up from his sleep and went to go wake up the aliens. When Charlie walked in the basement (that’s where the aliens were sleeping), there was no one there. He looked all around and couldn’t find them. So, he went outside and looked to see if their spaceship was still there. It wasn’t. He went to Bob’s house and Joe’s house to see if the aliens’ spaceship was at any of their houses. Nothing. He got so scared that he went in the house and woke up her mom and said, “It’s the aliens. They are not here.” In reply, his mom said, “What? What are you talking about?” Article posted October 21, 2011 at 09:04 AM • comment (3) • Reads 915 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  Great story! I really the idea of aliens. its a really great. I think you need to work on making your chapters a little longer. Great job! :)
Comment Posted on October 21, 2011 at 09:24 AM by
SB7Great story! I really the idea of aliens. its a really great. I think you need to work on making your chapters a little longer. Great job! :)
Comment Posted on October 21, 2011 at 09:23 AM by
SB7Yours was really good! I think you could have added a little bit more to the chapters, but your story is going great.
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