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7th period Spring 2013


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by AB teacher: Julia Osteen


Assignments
Change the World 05/10
Current Events 05/01
Religion 04/25
A World Without Pictures 03/25
Middle Ages 01/29
What is Culture? 01/10

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2/3 What I Learned about the Middle Ages
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My Creative Story Chapter 1

Charlie was playing kickball with his friends, Bob and Joe. They were having a lot of fun until they heard a strange noise and saw something flashing at the corner of their eyes. They looked up and saw a spaceship landing a couple of yards away. They ran toward the spaceship and hid behind a tree to spy on it. Once it landed, the door to the spaceship opened and over 1,000 aliens came out of it. This amazed Charlie and his friends so they came out of their hiding spots and walked closer and closer to the spaceship. When they got to the spaceship, the aliens started speaking a very, very weird language.
“Bleep blop, bleep blop, bleep blop”, said the aliens and then the alien up front stuck out his hand to Charlie and then the two of them shook hands.
“Hello. My name is Charlie. What is your name?”
The aliens were astonished by Charlie’s language. Then, the aliens started speaking their language again. After that, the aliens started speaking English and said,
“My name is Cyber. How are you today?”
Charlie and his friends were flabbergasted. The aliens can speak English, thought Charlie.

Article posted October 7, 2011 at 09:01 AM • comment (6) • Reads 983 • Return to Blog List

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Great post! I'm usually not into alien stories, but you made it fun. It's a great story to far!! I really want to know what is going to happen in this AWESOME story! :)
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:13 AM by SB7


Great post! I'm usually not into alien stories, but you made it fun. It's a great story to far!! I really want to know what is going to happen in this AWESOME story! :)
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:12 AM by SB7


Very interesting. You really made the story move fast, but I think you should add more suspense.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:11 AM by AH7


Very interesting. You really made the story move fast, but I think you should add more suspense.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:11 AM by AH7


Very interesting start! I love the word flabbergasted! Maybe next time explain a little more.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:10 AM by BR7


Cool story- the setup was interesting.Maybe you could add a little more to the story. That way the story could make more sense-cool story though.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 09:09 AM by RS


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