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Sir Stinky Breath Chapter 1
Once upon a time in a small village named Shama-lama-ding-dong there was an evil worm called “Wormy” that wanted to destroy the whole town. When a young villager named Peter Piper overheard Wormy planning his attack he suddenly remembered that he used to have pet worm, but he forgot to feed it. Then Wormy noticed Peter and remembered him. Wormy said, ”If you tell anyone I’ll cut you into pieces smaller than me!” Peter was no ordinary because unlike others he had a reason to be known he was the town’s most forgetful person. He had angered the townspeople many times and he didn’t want them to think he was crazy too! So he did what he does best and forgot about it completely. 2 weeks later the ground began to rumble…
Article posted October 7, 2011 at 08:09 AM •
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Your story was amazing!! Although there was some grammatical errors. Look for those next times. But overall your story was great!!
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:22 AM by
I loved your first paragraph it is so great. That is so funny. Cannot wait to read more of it.
Comment Posted on October 7, 2011 at 08:20 AM by
Great Job, this is very funny!! 1 thing to consider is comma's. Try to use them more instead of writing run on sentences. Otherwise, great story!!!
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